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　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
　　删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
　　2．只允许修改10处，多者(第11处起)不计分。
　　My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live.Though not very big，but the restaurant is popular in our area.It is always crowded with customers at meal times.Some people even had to wait outside.My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest.Every day he mare that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking.My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time.Instead，he hopes that our business will grow steady.
　　My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to thatwhere I live.Though not very big，  the restaurant is popular in our area.It is always crowded with customers at meal times.Some people even hadhave to wait outside.My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honesthonesty.Every day he mare that fresh vegetables orand high quality oil are usingused for cooking.My uncle says that he never dreams ∧of becoming rich in thea short period of time.Instead，he hopes that ourhis business will grow steadysteadily.
　　1．宾语从句中缺少地点状语，故用where引导。
　　2．though不和but连用，因though位于句首，故去掉but。
　　3．文章是介绍现在的情况，故用一般现在时。
　　4．此处是指“诚实”是他成功的秘诀，用名词形式。
　　5．从句意判断前后是并列关系，故把or改为and。
　　6．此处表示被动含义，be used for“被用来做”。
　　7．dream of doing sth.“梦想做某事”，为固定短语。
　　8．in a short period of time“在短时间内”，为固定短语。
　　9．此处指叔叔的生意，用his指代，保持人称一致。
　　10．grow“增长”是谓语动词，故用副词修饰。
　　(2016•新课标Ⅱ)
　　The summer holiday is coming.My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday.We can chose between staying at home and take a trip.If we stay at home，it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money.But in that case，we will learn little about world.If we go on a trip abroad，we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books.Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby.I thought that it is a good idea.It does not cost many，yet we can still learn a lot.
　　The summer holiday is coming.My classmates and I are talking about howwhat to do during the holiday.We can chosechoose between staying at home and taketaking a trip.If we stay at home，it is comfortable butand there is no need to spend money.But in that case，we will learn little about ∧the world.If we go on a trip abroad，we can broaden yourour view and gain knowledgesknowledge we cannot get from books.Some classmates suggest we canshould或  go to places of interest nearby.I thoughtthink that it is a good idea.It does not cost manymuch，yet we can still learn a lot.
　　1．根据句意“暑假即将来临。我和我的同学们正在讨论假期该干什么”可知，此处应用“what＋不定式”作动词短语talt的宾语，同时what还要作动词do的逻辑宾语。
　　2．情态动词can后应用动词原形，而chose为choose的过去式。
　　3．and连接两个并列成分。本句中动名词短语staying at home与taking a trip构成并列关系，都作介词between的宾语。